T2+Narrative+Writing

__WALT identify and use alliteration in our writing.__

SC •we can identify alliteration in our writing •we can create examples of alliteration on different topics.

B- Betrace the bear byes lots of boxes of bear. C- can cally carry curry in china. D- Dan does dirty dancing while doing the dishes. F- Freddy the fish finds fishing fun when fredy finds a fish. G- green grass grabs grumpy people. H- Henry the hen has had lots help while doing house work. J- Jack and Jaunty jump jacks just juring jump jam while eating jam. K- Kelly keeps keys and kina kindly for Ken. L- Losey likes lots of lollies and Linda likes ladies with love living in lodges with lovely lollypops lerking in light and live libraries and lick lots leaves and lettuce.

__Tuesday 14 June__ WALT use our senses to help describe in our writing. S.C we can describe what our marshmallow looks like ,smells like, looks like, feel like and tastes like.

Marshmallow Description!

My marshmallow looks like hard rock with a touch of soft fur on it's surface. It is the colour of my face when I am sick. The shape is a stone in my garden that has been slightly melted getting bigger at the bottom and smaller at the top. It smells like sweet icing sugar with a bit of flour, the smell speeds up through your nose as you suck up the smell. It feels like a you were skraching your fingers along a chalk board. After you have squesed it you have a white powdery flower left on your fingers. It is as soft as a pillow. The powder stuff on the outside tastes like flour, and when you lick it, it sticks to your tounge, it feels like you are licking chalk. As you bit into it it sqishes down and you get a soft sweet soft soggy feeling that melts onto your tounge.


 * __Monday 20th June__**


 * __WALT - identify personifications and use them in our writing__**

S.C. - we can identify the human trait being described we can identify the object being given a human trait we can write our own examples of personification we can explain why this helps to create a picture in our mind

__being personified and explain which human trait or action is applied to the object or idea.__ __1. The wind whispered through the dark and gloomy forest.__ __2. The gardener lovingly added the manure to his crops believing he was making happy flowers.__ __3. As we walked through the scorching desert, the sun beat down on us.__ __4. Time crawled as Tim sat in the hot detention room painfully watching the clock tic.__ __5. The lumberjack leveled the many trees into a clearing and his chainsaw sang its deadly song.__ __**Personification Worksheet**__ __**Personification:** a figurative language technique where an object or idea is given human traits or characteristics.__ __**1.**What is being personified? **The wind**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Whispered**__ __**2.**What is being personified? **The flowers**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **happy**__ __**3.**What is being personified? **Desert**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Beated**__ __**4.**What is being personified? **The time**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Crawled**__ __**5.**What is being personified? **The chainsaw**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Sang**__ __**6.**What is being personified? **The shoes**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Called out**__ __**7.**What is being personified?**Freedom**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Rang**__ __**8.**What is being personified? **Pencil**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Walked**__ __**9.**What is being personified? **The wall paper**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **Screamed at her**__ __**10.**What is being personified? **Guilted**__ __Which human trait or quality is given? **P****oked and chewed**__ __6. When Monica walked through the shoe store, each shiny pair of high heels called out to her.__ __7. When the patriots defeated the redcoat army, freedom rang across the fruited plains.__ __8. As Alice searched for her missing pencil, she said sarcastically, “Well, I guess it just walked off of my desk.” She looked at her classmates accusingly.__ __9. Kelly was so happy that Tom and she were moving in together, but when she walked into her new residence, she dropped her suitcase. She had never seen the inside of the house which Tom’s grandmother had given them, and though she was grateful to receive such a nice gift, the ugly yellow wallpaper in the kitchen screamed at her. She knew she would have a lot of work to do to make her new house livable.__ __10. William knew that he shouldn’t have eaten the last cookie out of the cookie jar. He knew that his father loved to eat chocolate chip cookies after work, but William ate the last one anyway. Now as he waited for his father to come home, guilt poked and chewed at William. As delicious as the cookie was, William now wished that he had never opened that cookie jar.__
 * Name: _** __**Directions:** In each sentence, an object or idea is personified. Identify the object or idea that is__

__**Name:**__ being personified and explain which human trait or action is applied to the object or idea. 1.What is being personified? **Waters** Which human trait or quality is given? **Sad** 2.What is being personified? **The Wind** Which human trait or quality is given? **Gripped** 3.What is being personified?**Joy** Which human trait or quality is given?**Visit** 4.What is being personified?**Engine** Which human trait or quality is given? **Coughed** 5.What is being personified? 6.Which human trait or quality is given? 7.What is being personified? 8.Which human trait or quality is given? 1. The sad waters of the icy wasteland streamed through barren landscape. 2. As Shelia walked home from school, the wind gripped her in its frigid fingertips. 3. Alan found that his wife had left him, and he felt that joy would never visit his home again. 4. The engine hacked and coughed as Kevin turned the key, but the old car wouldn’t start. 5. Though Dante tried to live a pious life and be a good father, the streets called to him at night. 6. The night was calm and still as crickets chirped and owls hooted under the light of the moon. 7. Though it’s been said that “Diamonds are a girl’s best friend,” some girls prefer chocolate. 8. Little Vito was attempting to sneak out of his parent’s house to cause trouble late at night. He was tiptoeing across the kitchen floor toward the backdoor the creaky floor boards and his squeaky shoes told his parents he was leaving. Big Vito was none too pleased with little Vito. 9. Gina was the most beautiful girl in the whole town. Her eyes were a blanket of stars. Her teeth shined like fresh porcelain tiles. Her long vivacious hair enjoyed many beautiful adventures as it traveled down the course of her shoulder blades. But the true source of her beauty was her personality: Gina made the world a better place by being a good person. 10. Victor was walking home from his friend Paco’s house late at night when he heard a tree branch breaking deep in the forest. His heart beat rapidly as he wondered what could have made that noise. Was it an animal? Was it a man? Was it something else? Victor knew that the forest would keep its many secrets as he would not be investigating tonight. Victor ran all the way home. What is being personified? _ __Which human trait or quality is given?__ What is being personified? _ __Which human trait or quality is given?__ What is being personified? _ __Which human trait or quality is given?__ What is being personified? _ __Which human trait or quality is given?__
 * Directions:** In each sentence, an object or idea is personified. Identify the object or idea that is
 * Personification Worksheet 2**
 * Personification:** a figurative language technique where an object or idea is given human traits or characteristics.









__Tuesday 21 June__

“Ahhh!” Lila shouted, “What’s that?” asked Kobey, “It’s some kind of glue stuff” explained Lila, “Ouch it is stinging my hand” “Ok ah, calm down and ah, just ah, wipe it off” said Kobey nervously. “how?” screamed Lila “on the grass” Kobey yelled quickly.